It's been a long time coming! AND NOW IT'S HERE AND GREAT!!
It's been a long time coming! AND NOW IT'S HERE AND GREAT!!
SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!
Bitey of Brackenwood is back and could be bigger than ever! Definitely going to support, my friend.
Cheers man!!!
Alright so this is REEEEALLY clean art wise. Although Paws eyes are too close together. He seems unfocused and that he loses some expression depth. But, if you're this far into production-- then I realize it's too late to change the design.
The voice acting is very hit or miss. Some characters are forgettable and uninteresting, leaving me to only want to hear Jim Cummings's performance and can't wait for the other characters to get off the screen.
The humor couldn't find its audience. Is it for kids? Is it for 20+ ? Billy Madison quotes then silly slapstick digging to China tropes? It didn't mend well together.
I'm only being this critical, because you clearly have the talent pool to rectify these things. I don't want you to think I didn't think this was incredible, cause I quite enjoyed it. Can't wait to see more!
I don't agree with a previous comment about the red nose making him look "cold". I totally got that it was sun burned. But he was correct about line thickness making the jelly look to be at a different distance. But it didn't even register with me until I read his comment... So take what you will from that.
Your set pieces though are gorgeous! I greatly look forward to seeing more art from you in the future though.
Keep up the good work.
I honestly didn't want to seem like I was making some excuse by saying it was a sun burn to him. But glad you got it! Also yeah I probably shouldn't have taken the lazy route with the jelly fish. I sort of just resized it from a previous scene. Not my best moment.
Anyways,
Thank you so much for the review! I truly appreciate it!
"I would watch it if it was a series" My girlfriend
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Great work! Glad to see how far along this has evolved, in character, personality, and humor! I can't wait to see where this leads. Let me know if I can help in any way, as well, bud.
Man it'd be cool if Sig and Tessa became Newgrounds icons,
BUT YEAH, im sure ill require your voice or script talent with later episodes
Hahaha. Loved it. Short, sweet, and a quick laugh. I love the fall animation and the SFX mix. Can't wait to see more from you!
Very, very, very well done. Great build for the story. I can't wait to see how both it and you develop as art and artist.
Critique though: Your action scenes need a little smoother movement, and reactions when it comes to collisions of blows.
Hehehe. Great job guys! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Thank you man!!! =)
Love it. Short, sweet, and funny.
Needed 40% more sfx though. Shifting away. A few reaction SFX from the side characters. etc.
Great job though! Hope to see more from you! Love your art style. Very simple design but very effective.
Wonderful work as usual, Stev. Don't be a stranger nao.
Jack of All Trades
Voice Director for Hazbin Hotel
Voice in Lost in Random,
Stick it to the Man, and many more
Age 36, Male
Voice Actor
Memphis
Joined on 6/30/08