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Timing was an essential element to this toon and you nailed it perfectly. There was a build up which was slow then a ramped conclusion leveling out the entirety of the pacing. So few artists understand that principality of writing. Anyway, the pay off was quite humorous as well. I actually laughed. Usually I just appreciate the humor as it stands. Kudos.

Your animation has gruh-hately improved; as has your storytelling. Pretty bang up job, sir.

Brewster responds:

Thanks! You don't even know how great it feels to hear that.

It delivers what it promises. Genius, and well animated.

4TAKEN responds:

Thank you. =)

Can you do no wrong?

Where can I download the soundtrack?

Ockeroid responds:

Just uploaded it and linked it to this movie :)

Needs better scene planning and better voice acting. But I can see this becoming a large success if you can fill those two gaps.

NinjAnimals responds:

Maybe you can lend me some money to hire some professional animators and voice actors for this.

A credit for a sigh? Hehe.
Anyway, looks good. Ya just need a finished product now.

EXHellfire responds:

Lol yeah, even though that guy is awesome and is voicing lots of badassery for an animation I'm working on

Not sure how these things make front page.

The humor is completely unoriginal, especially just following the coat tails of Oney's DBZ parody: Dragonzball P, which was on the frontpage-- What back in December? Only, your voice acting wasn't as good, nor was the art.

My advice? Make something all your own, humor-wise and study animation. I think after you've made several more flashes your art will be a definite improvement and will be something worthy of the front-page, but I think the humor is just recycled and dry as it stands now.

I'm afraid the premise is pretty damn similar to Sakupen's Dad Series. Much of what happened was the same as a matter of fact. So I'm quite dissatisfied with this. And I'm sure you were unaware of the matter, but still.

Brewster responds:

Actually a couple other people have said it was like Dad. So I went back and re-watched the series and I have to say they're not that similar. I mean, yeah, you have the main character who's always smiling and causing destruction. And of course the office scenario. But it's not like the office in this cartoon is the central point. And I honestly didn't even realize it was like Dad when I was making it.

Work on your pacing.

It was funny, but you need to work on your pacing. The jokes came too quickly, one right on top of the next. Ease into them a bit more. Great animation though.

Jack of All Trades
Voice Director for Hazbin Hotel
Voice in Lost in Random,
Stick it to the Man, and many more

Seth Atkinson @OdellAtkinson

Age 36, Male

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Memphis

Joined on 6/30/08

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